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perfect peace

Missing image

lying with tender leaves
striking spontaneously, nature's communion,

she transcended,
into world, not of her making,

thoughts denying euphoria
immeasurable happening inside
being unaware of herself.

Author notes

credit "Fallen From Grace" -- by mY.lifE.iN.lyricS

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  • KyleBerg gold member
    January 26

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    Your vocabulary is extraordinary. Love the wording you have chosen here.. you tell an encapturing tale with vivid imagery and a profound message.

    Thank you for your entry


  • Desire gold member
    January 12
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    Excellent~

    Love how You took the picture and penned it to another level
    Bravo!!
    Powerful imagery also words my Friend!!
    Especially words: nature's communion
    Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Voice~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet One
    Best wishes in the contest too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • maralisa silver member
    January 12

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    a beautiful take on the promt dad good luckin the contestmaralisa