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It's been so long
You'd think I'd forgotten...
But I can't forget
The one I fell in love with.

Ever since the day we parted
I haven't stopped thinking
About the way you
Made me feel...

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  • unable2fly
    April 29

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    the thing with love poems and what helps me the most is to catch the feelings while they're still frrsh on the brain. perhaps you could continue with what feelings you may have kept while you wre together. or try describing the one you loved like all of their minor details that you just couldnt get enough of. love is a very powerful emotion. take it and run. your off to a great start keep with it!