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The Rain And Love

The falling rain dances on our skin


As it does it slowly trickles down our flesh


As we kiss on one anther's lips


The rain


So cold and damp begins to warm as our bodies begin to meet

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  • oooh. love in the rain is the best feeling evah! its so short and so pretty.


  • Tadd
    January 21
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    well writen


  • NeSsA.69.
    January 16

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    Adorable..

    This just melted my heart when I read it....now I want it to rain just so I can do that with someone I love. Keep writing I enjoy reading these...


  • XxAloneXScaredxX
    January 14

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    this is a really sweet poem....the lines "As we kiss on one anther's lips The rain So cold and damp begins to warm as our bodies begin to meet "
    Made my heart melt and made tears form in my eyes....plz write more your a really good poet.


  • xXCadyBabbiXx
    January 13

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    Ohh my gawd.
    I never read anything so cute in my life.
    This is adorable!
    Aw, it makes me wanna find someone so I can do this x]

  • awesome

    this is so sweet........ keep up the good work.......

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