Half in the shadows
of a forgotten dream
staring up to heaven
do you remember me
here I am alone again
does this lonliness ever end
A contest entry
- Worth 1000 Words... Choose 26. by KyleBerg.
700 points, ended January 26, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think yall?
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Awsome
This one here is amazing in the detail expressed in such a short write. To be honest the title grabbed me to read this one lol. Thank you for this one.
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Thanks!!! Im glad you liked it. And yea the title is kinda like "READ THIS"
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Very moving words and a vivid story you have here.
I know sometimes the perfect title eludes us.. but I think any title would be better than none at all.. ? =)
Thank you for entering
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Wow, that's awesome for a 26 word write. lol.
As they say, it's quality. Not quantity! -
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Thanks huni. Glad you liked it
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this would have been really good if you could have continud but pity its only allowed to be 26 words its great
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Excellent write for the prompt, best of luck in the contest...
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