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Sweets

Sweets,
Love me with all that you have.
take me with all that you are.

Make me moan my pleasure,
go with me to places I've never been.

I want to ask for more, plead for less
and you should already know the perfect
amount, we've done this countless times
before.


Breathe me in.

Inhale me.

When you hand is in my hair,
and you fingers firmly around
my throat, Lose control and
deep within me,

leave your

sugar


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  • Idle Mind Wondering silver member
    January 26

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    there is a point somewhere between aggression and submission, between surrender and control, where senses are heightened and all we can do is let go. nothing compares!


    ken


  • JinSays gold member
    January 13
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    I had a bf once who liked me to grasp him by the throat. I didn't like doing it cause I was scared I'd hurt him. Didnt have any idea that was the idea. . .and I have no idea why Im telling you this.
    I like this write, the end is superb.
    I wish you the very best,
    and love always.
    jin


    • yourbentangel
      January 13
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      It's not the pain for me that I like, it is the thought of pain, of danger, of giving yourself COMPLETELY to the person that you are with and trusting them with all that you are to not take it to far and hurt you!!!! Love the new pic!!!