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Happy Birthday Gwandpa(Hugh)

8  is the hugs I send to you
1  is the love I hope comes through
16 is the boobies you'll get to see
16  is another to you from me
25 is the age we'll pretend you are
2  are the hearts that are near but far
9    is the wishes that are dear to your hearts
18  is the times we'll forget the farts
20  is the candles so the fiery's don't come
8  is the times you'll miss seeing my bum
4  is the stars that shine ever so bright
1  is the love you hold with all your mite
25 is the sparklers we'll wave for you
7  is the fingers that'll get burnt & end up blue
23 is the times you'll be thought of today
1 is yes it could be that way
14 is the cupcakes we will bake tonight
4  is the hours they'll take on the flight
16 is the drinks to celebrate your day
1 is the Gwandpa HAVE A WONDERFUL BIRTHDAY

Author notes

In case you haven't picked it up it's an acrostic poem with a difference......dont ask......instead of the letters I have used the numbers of the alphabet.
Hope you all enjoy
This is a special poem for a very special man on here

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  • chanzcesr
    May 10

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    10,9,8,7,6,5,4,3,2,1. is this anything to do with Midnight Oil's album?
    It does make me think how boring is my poetry! xxx


  • angelica silver member
    January 12

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  • hugh wyles silver member
    January 12

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    4 5 1 18 13 9 1

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    Gwampa

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