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What is there

What is there in a name of a royalty?
Is there any difference between them and other beings?
What's there in a name of a prince, a princess, a king or a queen may I ask?
They're normal human beings, that hold more responsibility than us ,
That's true

But how does that differentiate them with their subjects?
We're all human.

We cry, we laugh
We eat and we sleep
So what's the difference?

Should we be proud of the name that we hold
If we don't have the humbleness that our names reflect?

What is there to brag about?
What is there to show?
It wasn't us who conquered the land
It was our ancestors

Even if their blood runs inside our veins
Do we even have the right
To be so proud of what we've never done?

We were born in a royal family
With its own inside politics
A mini competition
Of who's the greatest of all

Don't you dare brag around
Selling your name just because
You were born a royalty

The name that you hold
Entitles you to a bigger responsibility
They will stare, they will look at you
And they'll be talking if you don't behave

So what is there to brag about?
What is there to show?

Author notes

My grandfather was a royalty, not that I want to brag. I just hate it when people brag about their family and their names if you know what I mean..and i want people to get the right message, to know my opinion about it. I hope the message that I'm trying to convey is passed through this. Critiques are welcomed, I want this piece to be perfect, and I admit that I am no good a writer.
Thanks for reading =)

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  • upperworld06
    January 12

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    yea, you are a good writer, i understood what you were trying to get across, don't know what to help you on. nice job, we are all human