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Control

 

Sanity,

     All but a world of rules,

Obey them or get expelled. 

 

 

 

 

Insanity,

               That is where my mind lingers-

    Expelled from the sanity for my rebel,

Believed they did, they could control me-

 

                                                        ...Think not!

 

 

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Prompt: The reality inside my insanity
Limit: 35 words

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  • Ken-Maverick
    January 13

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    For some reason this made me giggle,
    I can just picture you as a rebel lol
    but you did really well on this poem
    All the best to you in the contest

    Ken


  • chilali
    January 12

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    Great write love. I enjoyed this very much. Loved your take on the prompt. Good luck in Ronin's contest.

    Much love
    Ylova