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So Why Should I?

you dont know what im thinking
I keep trying to tell you but you dont understand
its like im speaking a different language and youre not speaking it
maybe im expecting too much
but is it too much to expect you to be there when you promised
to have a shoulder to cry on
instead i keep hiding more and more.
youll finally figure out something is wrong but i just cant tell you
i want to but i cant
so why should i?

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Deliberate lack of punctuation. feeling a bit lost.

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  • aw. very nice but sad though it's like speaking up as loud as you can but no one's listening . ooh, and you may need corrections on the 5th line


    • musik-freek
      January 12
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      Thank you, i didnt notice the mistakes... yeah im not at my greatest atm... it sucks... but thanks for the comment.

      • welcome aw. get well

        • musik-freek
          January 12
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          Ill try... hey i just wrote a prose pretty much of just random thoughts... nothing really, but could you read it... would mean a lot. thanks