Sometimes I want to hold your hand
Entwine your fingers with mine
And kiss your forehead
Place my lips on yours
And sing beautiful songs to your heart...
Sometimes I want to touch you
Take you in my arms and say
'No matter what I will always be there'
Hide you in my arms
Kissing the pain away...
Sometimes I want to hug you
And set you heart on fire
Watch you as your heart beats for me
Whisper those three golden words to you
And wake you with my gentle touch...
Sometimes I just want to look at you
Stand aloof and see your cute dimpled face
Smile as your eyes light up
When you see me...
But many times
I pray for you
Every second, every moment
As I hold you in my heart
And engrave you within the depths of my palm...
All these times
'I LOVE YOU'...
15th "June" 2007
© 2006-2009 Rinzu Susan Rajan
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Absolutely amazing. An exquisite piece. Really nice love story type poem. Good luck in the contest. Take care and have a great day.
Sandi
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Your poem reminds of my boyfrined. It really does. I hope you do well in my contest and thanks for entering.
-Jess
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I actually like this. Cliche, yet you took it and made it so emotional that the cliche can be overlooked. Your emotions are strong and I relate to this, only because it's something I really want. Great job and good luck in the contest.
Josh
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pretty good poem thank you
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Sometimes I want to hug you
And set you heart on fire
Watch you as your heart beats for me
Whisper those three golden words to you
And wake you with my gentle touch..
typo on the second line???
very touching paragraph -
This is really nice, made me sad cuz i cud REALLY use a hug n then some. Nice write.
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I normally dont like lovey-dovey poems
but this was penned so wonderfully I actually could read it without cringing.
Thanks for re-viving my faith.
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a nice piece thanks for entering
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These are beautiful and touching. I feel thi sway for someone right now. Some o fthe things in this poem are ohysical, but in a n emotional and sensitive way. I love the awy you entertwine physical connection with emotional sincerity. This is a perfect mixture of the two, and it is real and pure.
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awww
i know exactly how this feels. i want to do these things too.
great write, beautiful words
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WOW is all i can say
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