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Winsome Weavings

Missing image

Beauty mirrors in-between glowing gazes,

as our sensual sensations bestow blessings in bloom,

my tongue swirls around your naked necklace.

Time allowing touch to heal broken seams with musical stitches

as the strings on my guitar strum silently.

 

I adore each precious moment we share fly shy,

quietly you giggle, as your beautiful dreams blossom.

Our pathways intertwine like our fingers cuddle gently,

for devotion never doubts a lover’s affection.

 

Slowly you caress my body with deep heartbeats,

as you kiss me ever so softly with your breath

I fall into you, like a dream comes full circle

I'm yours to do whatever you wish, I sense your sincere soul.

 

You allow me to breathe your inner beauty,

and to experience living love is feeling…

Lonely eyes are so appealing, when they find their home.

 

I wish to dive into the pools you swim through,

crystal windows of honesty’s meadow

Grace me with your stare, like a star unaware of it’s surroundings,

I'll love you here, there, and everywhere.

 

 

We’ll forever share this moment within a sigh,

in reality, I dream of you and I,

underneath a blue moon that beguiles me like you do.

 

What good could my eyes be,
if my soul is nowhere inside me?

Then you came and called my name,

you brought back the flame in them.


You kissed me, caressed me, loved me,
like the feeling of being in the rain
a quiet storm in its rawest form
I felt so alive again.

 

And yes, living is feeling, what made my eyes so appealing
is finding myself mirrored through your own.


I could stare at you for hours,

and still couldn't believe everything is real
it is you baby, not me who made me feel

as you hear whispers from my slumbering soul.

 

That I’m no longer in my dreams

cause you are my awakening...

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Thanks for sharing your ink with my own Anna, my Fly Shy!

She’s a must read. http://allpoetry.com/ariazephyrzoe

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  • A sensational piece
    Beautifully penned with such sensual imagery

    A fantastic read


  • Kalexi
    January 15
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    Yummy

    Truly lovely, you two. Luscious images float upon the page, love the flow.

    Karen

  • WHOA! Imagery is definitely present and used to its best! Thank God I am mature for my age otherwise my mom wouldn't let me read your beautiful pieces. Well the whole piece was- as usual- breathtaking! Brava! Well written. . .again!


  • Sacred Ground
    January 14
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    Such a beauty... I am in awe of this woman! How truly beautiful, and dreamy! I love it!


  • Wailmer1997
    January 14
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    took my breath away


  • Mad Moon silver member
    January 14

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    When I was finally able to exhale, all my words went with that breath! Such rich sensual beauty, my dear brother...I am left wrapped in a wonderfully soft sigh.
    Love it, and you.


  • kjack
    January 14

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    Whew!!!wipes sweat from brow

    That was completely intoxicating. It made me want to go find someone to cuddle up too. I think I'm still awestruck. That is truly what love makes someone feel when alone together. It leaves you breathless!!! This is simply phenomenal.......You are still amazing my brother. Excellent write....

  • Eusebius
    January 14

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    Lovers pouring forth a great waterfall or cascade of love-words upon each other...sooooo very romantical!!


  • earthstar
    January 14

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    It is strange about what ponders upon when they are in love.The simple and sweetness moments come back as life changes into another forms of life.The ending of the last two sentences really hit me. I love them.

    Great work


  • everyone1 gold member
    January 14

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    Gloriously enchanting.



    and faithful to the end ...

    Exquisite poetry, in passion and form.

    Bless both of you.

    Peace carry you swiftly, in in her gracious arm.

    Love:

    ~ James ~


  • Salty Hibiscus gold member
    January 13

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    beautifully written. every word shines. i like the fact that the poem is written by two poets, and it is a breath-taking experience. well done, poets. =)


  • LunaSilverStars
    January 13

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    never ceases to amaze me when i come across your sensual writes, i absolutely love how your words just seem to fall into all the right places at the right times. this piece is wonderful!


  • endless-lover silver member
    January 13

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    I adore each precious moment we share fly shy,

    quietly you giggle, as your beautiful dreams blossom.

    Our pathways intertwine like our fingers cuddle gently,

    for devotion never doubts a lover’s affection.





    this poem was simply amaing!
    fo'sur, hehe
    the love and imag in it was great and deep, keep up the work love much,xoxox


  • Rovingone gold member
    January 13

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    That just makes the heart melt. You did such a beautiful job. Every word seemed to be so intimate. I love the thought of being able to simply lie and look on the one you love. That's so much the way it should be, for hours.


  • poeticpieces
    January 13

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    Such a pretty painting of words you two!
    Thanks for sharing Dad, I love you!
    Keep up the wonderful works of art!

    Tim Jr.


  • Introvert2006
    January 13

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    The Essence of Love...

    You two did a wonderful job, you can feel the love between the two, and wow, this is a very inspirational piece for those searching for a love as you describe.. Two hearts beating as one. This is really beautiful my friend.


  • ariazephyrzoe gold member
    January 12

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    Wow...just beautiful
    I never thought I could do collabo lol

    Thank you Tim for helping me write..it's been awhile

    love,
    Fly Shy eh

    ps Fly Shy reminds of the song 'Just my imagination
    (Running Away With Me) sang by Gwyneth Paltrow and Baby Face but I think the original is from Ronald Byrd
    I don't know lol

  • mcheadle
    January 12
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    You are in so deep

    this is not "Puppy Love" you have it bad...mac


  • smiley
    January 12

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    wonderful

    you leave me in awe every time your pen leaks to the paper.

    Yvonne


  • Trupoet
    January 12

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    Beautiful words. I have no discreption for this , is simply breath taking.

    loved it

    God bless you my sweet Tim.


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    January 12

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    so sensual, loving and well penned between to poets that entwined their quill as one, very sweet one, good luck , looks like a winner!
    mm

  • palms over face! totally a nice shy mushy mixture poem here you two did a very great job here
    i enjoyed you two


  • Lonely
    January 12

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    crystal windows of honesty’s meadow..
    That line alone is so beautiful. I love the poem, its romantic, sensual and beautiful with honest feelings woven in perfect words.. Great piece of poetry by you two!

    Love always,
    Lonely

  • Thor-201
    January 12

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    That I’m no longer in my dreams

    cause you are my awakening...

    beautiful lines, a perfect finish to a wonderful write.


  • Stardust-luvr
    January 12

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    wow passion reigns in every line my dearest with an essense of what true and lasting love should be. well done and many loving blessings always xxx Love you xxx


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    January 12
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    Ah, with such a dream,
    the awakening even a more
    sensuous reality!

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