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fashion; hands and heart

if for anything
this is for the damaged
than
or then
drifting like solid glass hedgestones
like granite gargoyles perched, calm and balanced on an eave

though the voice is high
her throat is not aching.
it is sordid rotting bruised
but begs to differ with the mundacity
which lilts in debate
the same as the days you shrug off with a whimper

you are not the champion
not for anything other than no one other

the damaged know better
well enough to laugh
at refuse and cinder
discarded placenta with rolling eyes...
this is for you.

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  • redbird
    January 17
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    your author notes: ...what?

    [well enough to laugh
    at refuse and cinder] --this doesnt make sense


    • delayedscreening
      January 20
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      the whole stanza should be taken into account. to know the value of self, well enough, to laugh at what wieghs against it. the garbage and ash created by the battle of being one's self in a world designed to challenge the stregnth and character of self. if this still don't make no sense, than refer to author's notes.