rare occurrence
in our arid land,
January indeed always dry,
with clouds hovering sky
people bewilder,
whether earth rotating clockwise,
migrating birds return home;
clock retreating backwards,
clairvoyant predicting
celestial happenings,
setting new trends on earth.
Author notes
prompt: January rain
A contest entry
- Prompt Contest 12 entries 40 or less words by mysticstorm.
600 points, ended January 13, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Thought provoking in brevity...the changes in the weather are most positively due to our actions or lack of them...nicely creative.
Thank you for sharing!
mystic
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a beautiful take on the promt dad good luck in the contest
maralisa
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Hi, yes the world's weather has become very strange, the fault part man, and possibly we are already in precession, loved this poem, kind regards, Di
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