the room
is dim
only a little
light on
in the corner
glowing yellow
on the white walls
shadows
stroking the floor's
glossy skin
i should sleep
but finally
it is quiet
and i can
think of you
Author notes
some of the best times to think of someone, is at night before you go to sleep.
A contest entry
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Comments
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Now this is a little better but I want to know your feelings. I want to feel what you feel. Thank you for entering and good luck.
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Beautiful.
I wish it could be that silent...one day.
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I agree with your note
Thank you for your entry
~Sithy
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