crowned a fool in satan's laughter
drowning in an unknown realm of why
with a simple fact, you've up and left
left me all alone to cry
and cry I did but not for you
but rather how dumb I've been
to fall for all the lies and tricks
that simply never seemed to end
I should have known right from the start
you screw one, you screw them all
but blinded by a lack of sense
has left me there to fall
and now I sit and gaze upon
the ways you've slain with pain
hurting more than just my soul
and how I'm sure you will again
so with my crown, earned in sorrow
fit snuggly against my head
I'll continue on the way I was
for this fool to you is dead
Please tell me what you think
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Crap! I hate it when a person is crushed like this. Darn thoughtless so and so's give decent guys a bad name but more than this they often mess with a person that is wonderful and beautiful and trusting. This brought tears to my eyes because I have seen so many women hurt like this. hope things improve for you.
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Thank you.
I know that there are decent guys out there and not all of them are total schmucks. I just never seem to be the one to find them, LOL.
Thank you for your words, they mean a lot to me.
~Val
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this is amazing, great rhyme, flow, and story. i love the last stanza, great job with this.
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