The special ones,in our life,
put up with us, when things aren't right.
They help us grow, and understand,
with what they need, and we demand.
They care for us, as we do them,
In lifes beginnings, and at the end.
The joy we have, in their prescence,
along with sorrow, in their abscence,
combine to form, those special ties
that are with us, till the end of time.
What did you think
Comments
-
Such wonderful wisdom, it is good to recognize the blessings we receive each and every day. A wonderful poem


-
so true
good write -
sweet and true. nice flow as well. kinda funny, but if you take the first line and the last line and combine them you get the whole meaning, just thought that was kinda cool. nice write


-
-
i never really looked at it that way, it happened on accident. thanks for pointing that out.
-



