Roll another one my friend,
and travel in your mind
Float across the universe,
leave the real world far behind
A land of total make-believe,
where no one’s ever rude
Peace and love will rule the day,
with lots of women; dude
For several hours I drift away,
with the fragrant smell of weed
Only stopping to get a drink,
and something on which to feed
Author notes
Brought to you by the color Hippie Green. Art:weed___by_Club_Marijuana atdeviantart.com This poem was written about a movement in our culture some thirty years ago. It promotes no way of life or says nothing about using drugs in the modern era, it is just a look back on a time of our nations history.
A contest entry
- Hues of Green in 12 Lines or Less (there's a catch) by The Fun House.
1050 points, ended January 28, 17 entries
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Comments
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wow
I Loved it. Honostly amazing. XD peace?
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just...amazing! :]
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o i like it it just flows off the tounge just wounderful
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sweet
it is so grt dude
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:D
wow -
"Roll another one my friend,
and travel in your mind
Float across the universe,
leave the real world far behind" = Well written
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I think you may want to put this under adult so the kids cannot read it. It is an effective piece for the color prompt. Nice job.
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Love it, I absolutely love it!
Wonderful imagery and you really captured the experience,
Great job, I love it! -
Ain't those munchies a kicker. Tail end hippy here loved it!
Peace and Love to ya man!
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YESSA!
Been there, done that~~~many times,
You certainly captured the spirit of the flower child's peace, love, and rock ~n~roll era.
Great write,
Loved it!
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Nice job. I remember the hippy generation. I think this poem captures the spirit of the times until people came down from the decade long high.
Mike
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oh I remember it well
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