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[today I fled the house]

I fled the house
Gathered a wonderfully baked wedding ring
to make my love
                      a possession,
                        procession.
an unwanted thing
a one way gate

Flowers gathered,
scared into wilting.
We wandered around
                                    town.
Hills left us winded,
Spewing frothing profanities

A tree
    caught me,
like it's cliff home
and all the rustic houses
empty like the season.

Night slunk from the ground
                    and a sex moon
I missed the delicious flan
and  beautiful laughter
                    a full body chime

A discomforting hug
                clung as used oil
                and dirt
and night, was finished in
                        cheese burger packages.

Author notes

I am so tired... gonna fix it I swear! You read all my old ones so I made a new one.

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