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Hurt Me, Love

Constantly chasing a feeling of belonging,
I thought you would fill for me,
Sweet talking and a frail connection,
And I thought we had more.
I never use to believe in love,
And even through the pain you caused me,
I still found the beauty and truth,
That love is real and alive.
The sex was not sex and unlike all the others,
It was a magic that I craved,
Snow falling down and sweet whispered words,
You haunt me through those memories.
You taught me how to open up,
I felt what no other could invoke in me,
Flowing warmly through my vains,
Putting a smile on my face and lighting my eyes.
I always promised never to hurt you,
So why, love, have you deceived me,
You made the same vow to me,
And you shattered my world with your deception.
I never regret loving you,
And I would suffer the same again,
So hurt me, Love, forever more,
I will embrace you everytime.

Author notes

I wrote this for the smae boyfriend that I wrote Save Me, Love. I found out on New Years Day that he cheated on me, and I don't mean just sex he had another girlfriend. Needless to say I was torn apart from the inside out.

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  • BrokenHeartsInVain
    April 27

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    It's a great poem, discriptive in many ways.
    Thank you for entering, and good luck in the contest. ♥


  • XxAmongtheBrokenxX
    March 2

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    Ah, love. It sometimes sounds more like Stockholm Syndrome to me. lol Anyway, I really like this. But I did catch a spelling error (constintly = constantly). No biggy, just a quick fix. And in the second line, is "fill" supposed to be "feel"? Lastly, you might want to pop a "d" after "use" in the fifth line. Other than that, it's perfect. Well done

    Thanks so much for entering in the contest and good luck!