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I am but a leaf upon the winds of life
Scattered across the land by fates whim

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planning to extend this poem

A contest entry

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  • trekkergirl
    March 28

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    oh wow this is soooo short but so very good. I really do like it and wouldn't change a single thing in it. Good write. Flowed wonderfully. And said a whole lot.


  • poetrandy
    January 21
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    Very good!

    I really like this! Would you call it a Haiku or ? Great work, friend!


  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    January 16

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    We are all leaves that create the family trees of life, beautifully written. Best to you in the contest