Sitting on the sandy beach
Listening to the waves crashing
The ocean water gently rolling up on
the sand and splashing over our
feet then slowly rolls back
into the ocean so blue
Author notes
"im getting in shape with Darkwell"
This is my first try at a shape poem. I think it is a hexagon of some sort.
Please tell me what you think
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This is really well done, the form is great - it must have taken time to present the format correctly. I love the imagery it brings the piece to life beautifully.
Thank you for entering my contest and good luck
Shari
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You've been tagged by A group for animal lovers!
this is a nice shape poem, and I love the beach. I miss it and this makes me want to be by the ocean so bad. nice imagery. I've never tried a shape poem before. it must be challenging to get it right! you did a good job with this one!
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I live in Chicago, so I have a messed up ocean. But, I always liked the sounds and the sand. This poem brings me back to it. NICE!
Just paying it forward.
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yah its definitely a hexagon and a really good one i love the beach and you wrote this so beautifully
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this is awesome. like a mini-vacation to the beach!!
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