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Burnt Heart

Missing image

My heart:
Small and burnt.

Love is left

But not forever.

Hold me soon

 

Please.

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Prompt: I'll wait for you. But I can't wait forever.

15 words - Not so good at this short poem thing...

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  • just weak hands
    January 11

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    I adore your take on the prompt ! This is what everyone goes through not only once, but various times through their life. It's only natural.

    I can't say much else besides I love it ! Brilliant write !

    Thanks for entering and best of luck !


  • Canadamomma
    January 11

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    wonderful take on the prompt...best of luck to you in the contest


  • penman gold member
    January 11
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    Wonderful

    Such a great take on the picture. Best of luck in the contest.