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Sweet Heart

Here I am
Torn in to pieces
Seeing you for the first time
Sweet heart
I told you everything
Opened up my doors to my heart
Sewn up together
With this broken needle
Once again
I can't pretend
That your really the one
Swallowing me up
Then spitting me out
No
I can't
I won't cry in front of you
Sweet heart
I see your not the one
Too bad that you died......

Author notes

RANDOMNESS! lol this just came to me when I was listening to "Breakaway" by Kelly clarkson...

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  • allygirl87
    January 11
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    i like this one you are such an amazing writer!!