gently did she sway
in the order of nature
within a higher spirit
a curve of endless smiles
lie in a breathless state
with the skin of her flower
i drink of her cup
and suckle the dew
i declare her jubilee
from this poet's lips
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A contest entry
- Pick a word - Write a poem in 10 LINES or Less (N) by The Fun House.
1050 points, ended January 31, 19 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Golden.
Through and through.
How wonderfully fulfilling.
Makes me sigh.
jin
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... jubilee ... skin of her flower .... from this poet's lips ...
yeah, see, I know yer one of the greats around here, and I sometimes look at your brew and think, 'he does it, doesn't he' ... he does it right ...
Moq
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congratulations on the gold
a stunning write
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Phenomenal! This is just outstanding. Don't touch it! I love it!
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the title on its own is pretty epic. and spectacular.
this was a beautiful piece. I normally can't stand pieces about sex and "getting it on" (so to speak) because they're all so over done and ridiculously dramatic but I thought this was wonderful. it reminded me a lot of this one sence in The Virgin Suicides which is one of my favorite books of all time.
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A psalm, a song to rival Solomon. "jubilee", the touch that so softly sweetens. Wondrous.
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You're smart.
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PERFECT!!!!
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Beautiful.
I hope that all is well in your world.
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