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Dreams echoes

marmalade skies grace
echoes in silent slumber
dreams menageries

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PROMPT:
In this contest,

submit your original Haiku / Senryu,

consisting of 17 syllables or less.

No more than 17 syllables.
There must be an AHA-moment in the last line.

A contest entry

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  • Harrisham Minhas
    January 17

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    Thanks for your entry:

    "marmalade skies grace
    echoes in silent slumber
    dreams menageries"

    Nicely expressed.

    Thanks again.

    Harrisham Minhas


  • Desire gold member
    January 15

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    Oooooooh~

    I commend You for taking on a Haiku-
    mine don't tend to fair to well
    Excellent this is especially
    with words: marmalade skies
    Woot!

    Keep that quill dancing~
    Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Voice~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet One
    Best wishes in the contest too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • Grey Mouser
    January 13
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    Nicely done exploding with some vivid imagery. Best to you!
    GM


  • StarEyes
    January 11

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    Sis,

    This is AHHHHHHHHHhh for sure! What a wonderful job you did on this one... I can almost see that, and makes me wish....

    Best of luck in this contest!

    and love

    Nyetta