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Giving In

Submission is my simple bliss
As I feel you yield the same
A sigh with every place I kiss
The wonder as you cry my name.

Our forms entwine on the bed
On your lips I feast and find
All those words left unsaid
As I make you mine.

Your soft thighs and adoring eyes
Cry your love and passion
An ecstasy with you and me
A new life we will fashion.

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  • geckogirl silver member
    January 12
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    very nice & sensual... a blessing to read something so beautiful.... well done
    Cheers


  • StarEyes
    January 11

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    This is soft and gentle, and with a hint of sensual love that makes the reader almost melt into it! What a great read! This is great!

    Best of luck in this contest!

    and love me friend

    Nyetta