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I still want you

        All the lies and all the anger built up hiden behind my teary eyes dont change the way my heart feels.I would do anything to have you come back or to be sittin beside you with my arms wrapped around your body tightly. I dont care what you did I dont care what you said I dont care that you ran away from me all that matters all i know is I still want you.                      It doesnt matter that you built me up to believe in you. It doesnt matter that you gave me false hope . It doesnt even matter that you lied about sticking around and being part of my life,all i know , all that is important to me is that i truly still want you.

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