When you talk
My heart sings
When you laugh
My joy it brings
When we talk
All thoughts we share
When either cries
We are always there
My heart is yours
Your love is mine
I’ll be by your side
Till the end of time.
A contest entry
- the biggest prewrite contest ever by serenity silvermoon.
900 points, ended January 18, 362 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - pif/round contest part one - prewrite's by serenity silvermoon.
800 points, ended July 10, 566 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think?
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awwwwww soo sweet
i love it!
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This is fantastic! What a great job you did on this one! This sounds so much like me and the one I lost
You amaze me with how wonderful and sensitive your writing is!
Best of luck in this contest!
and love
Nyetta
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a great ryhme... very sweet.... good luck
Cheers....
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*sigh* I remember feeling that way once upon a time. You capture love so well. Fantastic job ^.^
♥ Kathraina
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very cute poem i love to read love poems this was a great poem i think you should center it to make it greater no just kidding i loved the poem
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