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Nadeenam saagaro---


Kids move affectionately
towards their breasting mother!

Young ones lovingly
flow towards their chosen beloveds!

Mid aged  humans with their body and mind
naturally stream towards their better halves

Oldies without any standard hope or desire
glance  wishfully towards the setting sun

Like wise the rivers, route their directions
to reach ultimately  for the  cordial embrace of  seas

We the devotees soulfully
traverse our paths to hug the dedicated  abode of yours

Is it not  all your plan of progress my lord!?
they only follow your directions in toto

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  • Indeed we all follow HIS directions...this way we all are the follower of HIS path..very well crafted poetry is here my friend..well done...