Its cause of her
my heart is broken
its cause or her
i started smokin
inside of me
my love is shut
to let it out
i deeply cut
im really starting to het
all my pain and misery
i really cant wait to die
so my happiness
will be set free
A contest entry
- Contest 2 of Suffering and Pain. Loss by MichaelSavage.
625 points, ended March 20, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I know its not good but tell me what you think
Comments
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This is sad. Good poem. Good luck.
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this is a very good poem very strong and a lot of emotion to it i'm very sorry for what happened and i hope ur heart heals
keep up ur good work -
oh my
this is REALLY good...... its very powerful..... keep up the good work..
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damn that is strong and sad.....good job
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