An unforgiving difference
the gap between rails
and as the train goes by
sparks leap off said tracks
to ignite fires within.
Hate burns bright,
while curses are muttered
and threatening gestures made.
“You wanna fight?”
Well maybe we will.
Author notes
10 lines
Promp: Wrath
Well, mostly about Wrath?
Sorry, this one really is sucky.
A contest entry
- another by written-in-ink.
400 points, ended January 11, 2009, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Blah-fish
Comments
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i still love it honey
so much
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Hey Sweet Pea,
This is wonderful! I like this, alot said in so few words! What a great job!
Best of luck in this contest!
Ek is lief vir jou altyd
Mom


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hehe, maybe we will
i likey...muy mucho 
haha, good luck and take care
Stephanie ♥



