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Unforgiven

An unforgiving difference
the gap between rails
and as the train goes by
sparks leap off said tracks
to ignite fires within.

Hate burns bright,
while curses are muttered
and threatening gestures made.

“You wanna fight?”
Well maybe we will.

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Promp: Wrath

Well, mostly about Wrath?

Sorry, this one really is sucky.

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  • written-in-ink
    January 11, 2009
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    i still love it honey
    so much
    <33


  • StarEyes
    January 11, 2009

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    Hey Sweet Pea,

    This is wonderful! I like this, alot said in so few words! What a great job!

    Best of luck in this contest!

    Ek is lief vir jou altyd

    Mom


  • luna-midnight silver member
    January 11, 2009

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    hehe, maybe we will i likey...muy mucho
    haha, good luck and take care
    Stephanie ♥