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January Rain




on a smooth surface
where the morning mists grace
the layers of frost wet with tears
drops as quiet as a dream
lacing the eve of another
January mourn
caught somewhere between
the darkness of night and yawn of day ...



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  • mysticstorm gold member
    January 13

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    Very creative and intruging...
    saoft flow with lovely imagery.

    Thank you for sharing!

    mystic


  • Saint Irial
    January 11
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    awesome... but too tired to explain why.


  • januaryrain gold member
    January 11
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    Beautiful, the flow is wonderful, leaves one with a soft peaceful feeling.
    Excellent.