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Antidisestablishmentarianism

Like violence you haunt me
broken lilac scattered as if it is my soul
a footprint crushed into the dirt of my heart
a path to lead me home.

I left and so did you;
only you came to find me.

I was found
crushed and defeated
clutching my broken heart.

And you just turned and walked away.

Author notes

Prompt: Innocence
10 lines

Uh, broken innocence I guess?

Sorry if it sucks.

The title is long but it makes sense if you know what it means. I think.

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  • Werewolf Avarus
    January 12, 2009

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    A beautiful write! And one heluva long title

    Kate


  • written-in-ink
    January 11, 2009

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    broken lilac scattered as if it is my soul
    a footprint crushed into the dirt of my heart


    liked lots

    luck love
    <33


  • luna-midnight silver member
    January 11, 2009

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    cool! this is crushing, but i liked it, and i love the bg scheme..pretty ^-^
    good luck and take care
    Stephanie ♥