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Eyes

Stars swim in her misty oceans of eyes
Causing the sparkle that she sees in everything
Light dances with the shadows
And she twirls with them to the unheard rhythm

Clear skies and glassy lakes

Sing with the proof of her endless eyes

Her view of everything holds no darkness

The dark fades to light

The sadness morphs to happiness

Her vision changess everything

Seeing what she wants to see

Encloses her mind

And shuts her out from the reality

Every day has its night

Not all sadness turns to happiness

Dark doesn't dance with light

Except within her eyes

 

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  • mysticstorm gold member
    January 12
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    Please check the rule...word limit...

    thank you!
    mystic


  • Malabu
    January 12
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    great poem....im just wondering about the word count


  • maralisa silver member
    January 11
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    a great take on the promt good luck in the contestmaralisa