It was too warm
to snow
despite the tendency
of precipitation of
the time.
The rain melted
the bitter blanket
that had cloaked
her world.
Author notes
Inspired by my boyfriend 
He has melted the bitter cold that had surrounded my heart for so long, my heart that had doubted love would ever exist for me
A contest entry
- Prompt Contest 12 entries 40 or less words by mysticstorm.
600 points, ended January 13, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments and critiques are encouraged.
Comments
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Nicely creative and well written...a wonderful feeling to have someone make the heart feel safe once more...
Thank you for sharing!
mystic
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