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For Bluesky

We can just stand
Looking at the sky
Listening to the rain

Waiting for the sunshine
Like rays of hope
Watching for a Bluesky

Laughing away the days
Seasons will come to pass
Wishing summer would last

Smell the scent of the rain
Waiting for the storm
Searching for rays of hope


Author notes

I chose Bluesky and, she is 12

A contest entry

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  • Violinstrings silver member
    January 12, 2009
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    I just want bluesky to read it


  • Violinstrings silver member
    January 11, 2009
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    i will add prizes later when i get points
    i love the poem anyway that you enters great use of happiness it is about happiness


    • Lorien
      January 11, 2009
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      Thank You! i was just hoping to brighten someones day really..


  • Violinstrings silver member
    January 11, 2009

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    thank you for your entry i will make sure you get something for it right now i lack points hopefully I will win some