stifling silence
swathed in white wool snow
swathed in white wool snow
windless
Author notes
it is snowing with no wind it does not happen here very often. that this house is so quiet
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A contest entry
- Humor, and or Nature Haiku by misticmoonlite.
665 points, ended January 14, 27 entries
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Nice
Nice alliteration
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tanka very much
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very nice i love it and it is a very nice and short piece keep up the geat work.
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my humble thanks
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Less is more...
Fantastic!!!
So much imagery expressed in so few words...
Keep up the good work & good luck in your contest...
Well done!!!
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my humble thanks
so weird here with no wind, find it hard to sleep with out the house rocking
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wonderful
Very creative and well done. Best of luck in the contest
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my humble thanks
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the weather is
never predictiable as we look for calm and get wind and snow,you penned this so truely, thank you for this entry
mm
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my humble thanks
I live in a land of wind and fog silent snowfall here is rare indeed
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silent..
and cold, your imagery in so few words is impressive my friend..
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my humble thanks
not so cold, NO WIND!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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