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Its us against the world

These neighborhoods
Never were big enough for us
So let's ditch these streets
And go see the city lights
Cause these winter nights
Are getting so old

Open up your eyes
Cause there's a great big world
Ready for us to take control
The world might not be able to handle us
But we are ready to give
It a try

I know it's what you've been waiting for
So let's fallow the sunrise
Cause I don't want to wait
For the stoping snow
And its us against the world
And there is no turning back

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  • phillyhottpockets
    January 12
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    very good but you need to learn how to spell


  • meggie94x
    January 11
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    good but on the 6th stanza did u meab cold* instead of old?
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