January rolled in
on a storm of resolutions,
but the nagging rain of thought
drowned many good intentions
leaving just the few
that were worth consideration.
Author notes
strangely enough this is not a rhyming poem.
A contest entry
- Prompt Contest 12 entries 40 or less words by mysticstorm.
600 points, ended January 13, 12 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
UT
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Love the metaphor and creativity of your words...how true they are...nicely done.
Thank you for sharing!
mystic
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Outside the box, a wonderful poem penned, thanks for sharing
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A thoughtful, very well-expressed and beautifully fashioned poem.
Lovely work,
Bill
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WELL EXPRESSED!!!
I believe all of us start with intentions of finishing what we start but with time most are forgotten.'s
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The flow is smooth, the imagery is crisp, the thoughts are lucid, the metric beat of this deepens the impact, leaving me feel the chill of winter. A very beautiful poem.
I love the confidince of this write, I almost detect a bit of consonation, this is truly charming to me. I hope you do well with this one.
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i dont like it
whats the piont
makes no sence
i know you could do better
anywasy
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I see nothing wrong with this write, just an overzealous critic.
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Lol, maybe if you think a little you would understand, and while you are at it, spell check you comment, plus your grammar, happy new year, kind regards Di
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thank for the comment
i will take you advice
kind regards
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