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Growing Diamonds

Tears cling to my heart
as icicles to barren trees;
suspended over capricious seeds
of hope trapped under fallow obscurity,

Until night relinquishes the dark
and January rain to the light,
growing  diamonds in the
midst of winter's garden.

A contest entry

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  • Danna Hobart
    January 14

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    There is something tragically beautiful about this. Thank you for so very much for entering my contest.


  • mysticstorm gold member
    January 13
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    Such lovely imagery and creativity...nicely done.

    Thank you for entering!

    mystic

  • goalsv
    January 12
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    Such a poetic verse, full of imagery. Excellent job.


  • Venugopal gold member
    January 12
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    nice take on prompt