The air is filled with love
within the deep forest
two young lovers necking
with tongues happily dancing
Hearts beat as one
as they discover each other
the moon is their only light
with shadows of love
A contest entry
- Pick a word - Write a poem in 10 LINES or Less (N) by The Fun House.
1050 points, ended January 31, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is a lovely piece. I'm not sure I would have used the necking and tongues so closely as they sort of imply the same thing, but still this is a good poem indeed.
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aww, this is beautiful, it's put such a smile on my face. you've put so much emotion and gorgeous imagery into so few words. short and sweet. thank you, i truly enjoyed reading this!! - ElectricBloom
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