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writer's block




Staring at my computer screen
Trying to write a poem
Seeing only my thoughts
Sending me a message

You don't love me anymore





A contest entry

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  • jayyniecakes.
    February 14
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    a little bit too short for my taste... but a good choice of words.

    best of luck in my contest.


  • Li snuffles
    February 8

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    STraight to the point...

    this piece speaks to me of how difficult it is to go about your everyday life but at the back of your mind there is always the constant reminder that you are no longer loved.

    thank you for entering and good luck

    lisa..xxx


  • SithHappens
    January 13

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    unexpected

    but wonderful, as the person before me said, wonderful take on the prompt. Thank you for the entry

    ~Sithy


  • Desire gold member
    January 12

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    OMG~


    Holy Moly this tugs so hard at the core that I had to re-read this because it packed a punch~
    You sure know how to bring forth emotions
    Powerful verse- Oy!! Swells the eyes my Friend
    Excellent take on the prompt
    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet One
    Best wishes in the contest too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • suseann
    January 11

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    Not writer's block,but distracted. Or the persona of the computer in metaphor is uncooprative and won't let you type. I'm being silly of course. Love can be a distraction I know. Very. And this verse speaks of it in brief yet potant terms.

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