It matters not
If I am sad
It matters not
If my heart weeps
It matters not
If I miss you
It only matters
That you are happy
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Aaaaaw Dangggggg~
Holy Moly this swells the eyes
Powerful piece with emotions that tug deep~
You sure have a way to bring the reader right there to the moment
Excellent this is my Friend
Last two lines~ Wow
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Voice~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet One
Best wishes in the contest too
with much love & light~ Desire~*~
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These passionate lines share in a depth of love in emotions. And says a lot in it's brevity of devotion. Although love is in truth the ultimite surrender of self in benefit of another. Remembering too,all the world loves a winner. And too much self effacement will only leave us alone because of that. Keeping romance alive,it needs challange or at the least. Some miniscule lingering doubt. Feeling too secure in a relationship makes it's luster dull. Yet I'm sure any author with this much depth to express love openly,already is aware of this.
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ah i know this feeling.
when you're torn between missing them and loving them and wanting them to be happy but wanting them to be miserable. it sucks. i love this, i can relate to it. you've poured so much emotion into such a short poem.
thank you i truly enjoyed reading this!
best of luck in the contest you have entered.
ElectricBloom
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so many emotions
love and happiness is all that matters, as long as it is agreed on both sides lol...thank you for this entry...good luck
MM
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