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Colorful Influence

Yellow

You made my world
My hopes
My dreams

Yellow

Bright, sunny yellow

Blue

You left me
My life
My thoughts

Blue

Cold, sad blue

Black

Nothing else exists
My tears
My dispair

Black

Hard, unforgiving black

Yellow

I'm over you
My laughs
My smiles

Yellow

Bright, sunny yellow

 

For now I see

Your deceptions

Your lies

 

You're gone for good

And I'm glad

 

Yellow

Author notes

That was...interesting...not one of my better poems

Option 7 - Colors

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  • my02U
    January 11

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    no, i agree, definitely not ur best, sis... i dont get AC's comment @ all but w/evah.

    lurv u

    did u like the play friday?? i thot it was spectaculah!

    luv lilz


  • Shades of Pale silver member
    January 11

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    oooooooooooooooooooooooo cool! pretty! poor yellow sorry I is hyper... hehe


  • ACpoetry
    January 11

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    Interesting indeed

    Yellow, it seems like your life got interrupted by blue and black and yellow never came again. Interesting.
    Good luck

    - A.C.