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O my sweet and spartan siren!
O my wondrous, earthly muse!
Have you ever seen your smile
which blinds me every day anew? 


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  • misticmoonlite gold member
    January 11

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    awwww

    this reminds me of an old style form of poetry,
    lovely and well written, thank you for this entry...good luck
    mm