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We Are The Night Sky

I am the moon
Full in heart
Beating, throbbing, pulsing
Just for you
I shine beautiful
For your hazel eyes

You are the stars
Lighting my way
Twinkling, glowing, shimmering
Just for me
You guide the way
To my wandering heart

We are the night sky
Encompassing the earth
Comforting, protecting, romancing
Just for us
We combine
Though thousands of miles away

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Davey tells me that the moon is almost as beautiful as I am when it glows full in the night sky.

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  • Natchnium
    January 11
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    good

    True and it is right on for me and you.