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Damning thoughts

Condemning lies

Love has brought

The end demise

Struggle through

Each loss forgave

Though only to

Proclaim our charade

Never knowing

Never shall

Pretense of owning

The love gone now...

c2009 vduna

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  • mrocun
    January 11
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    To be honest, not sure if I personally like it
    but I can not say that it is not well written.


  • hotchocolate gold member
    January 11
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    Wonderful write here that you penned and I enjoyed this read hon! Find a contest for this hon!


  • Patpowers silver member
    January 11

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    Awesome work Vic!

    Emotional is how I can describe this latest work. Just a powerful work of poetry in this. This is one of your best. THANKS!