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Me or Them

I've been broken so many times,
Heart in a million pieces.
Not anymore, though,
Because I met you.
You haven't broken my heart yet.
I wonder why that is.
Do you really love me?
I find that hard to believe.
No one has before.
I wonder...
Is it me?

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Prompt:
"Unusual You" by Britney Spears

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