Forgiveness is a release
Of your own judgment
A burden that you put on yourself
A mind in constant turmoil
Forgiveness is healing
Restores the love between God’s sons
The trick made to divide is thwarted
The devil’s plot has been foiled
To say “I forgive you”
Is a gift you give yourself
Is salvation of your tired and weary mind
From the ugly clouds of blame and shame
To say “All is forgiven”
One would be seeing what’s already done
For every one of God’s beloved sons
And we shall be free of the devil’s game
All is forgiven
For those who believe, they see
There is no need to blame others
For there is no punishment to be feared
All is forgiven
For those who believe, they see
There is no reason to attack or defend
For it’s justification has disappeared
Forgiveness is a gift to ourselves
Saving the mind from it’s self made hell
Releasing the dark clouds of our judgment
A mind full of belief in guilt is set free
Forgiveness is the key
To unlock the prison of our own making
For we are only trapped as long as we
Refuse to use the forgiveness key
Of your own judgment
A burden that you put on yourself
A mind in constant turmoil
Forgiveness is healing
Restores the love between God’s sons
The trick made to divide is thwarted
The devil’s plot has been foiled
To say “I forgive you”
Is a gift you give yourself
Is salvation of your tired and weary mind
From the ugly clouds of blame and shame
To say “All is forgiven”
One would be seeing what’s already done
For every one of God’s beloved sons
And we shall be free of the devil’s game
All is forgiven
For those who believe, they see
There is no need to blame others
For there is no punishment to be feared
All is forgiven
For those who believe, they see
There is no reason to attack or defend
For it’s justification has disappeared
Forgiveness is a gift to ourselves
Saving the mind from it’s self made hell
Releasing the dark clouds of our judgment
A mind full of belief in guilt is set free
Forgiveness is the key
To unlock the prison of our own making
For we are only trapped as long as we
Refuse to use the forgiveness key
Author notes
Inspired by reading ‘A Course In Miracles’.
This poem was entered into the contest on 'human virtues' selecting 'forgiveness'. The ability to forgive is innate in all of us, once fear is overcome.
In a list
- My poems inspired by 'A Course in Miracles' • next in list
- The Inner Spirit - Bonita's poems • next in list
- My Forgiveness Helpers • next in list
A contest entry
- 34 Human Virtues to Pick From by Nicada.
850 points, ended March 6, 14 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Best of the Best by Desdmona.
1400 points, ended April 1, 22 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This was very good. I enjoyed the idea of forgiveness and how you explained it so well. The diction was well chosen and it flowed nicely. Well done. Good job and good luck. ~Des
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Has to go in the book absolutely HAS to.
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wow,
this is awesome!
GREAT JOB! and congrats! -
So true and forgiveness can be so powerful but also so difficult in many situations. A strong write, and thanks so much for entering. BLessings, Patty


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Thank you very, very much!
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Beautiful, and very accurate. If only more people would understand this, what a difference it could make to our world.
WELL DONE.
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Well said. Awesome write.
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Absolutely perfectly written. I cannot give enough claps on this page so I shall say 10000 times
If only more people would wake up to this! How about joining my group. The law of attraction? -
Superbly written, awesome thoughts, easy flow and a beautiful inspirational message sent out to the world. I totally agree, forgiveness is the way we should all be. We all wish for it, therefore, we should also give it unto others.
I am glad I read this, it is the BOMB.


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