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The Key

Forgiveness is a release
  Of your own judgment
  A burden that you put on yourself
  A mind in constant turmoil

Forgiveness is healing
  Restores the love between God’s sons
  The trick made to divide is thwarted
  The devil’s plot has been foiled

To say “I forgive you”
  Is a gift you give yourself
  Is salvation of your tired and weary mind
  From the ugly clouds of blame and shame

To say “All is forgiven”
  One would be seeing what’s already done
  For every one of God’s beloved sons
  And we shall be free of the devil’s game

All is forgiven
  For those who believe, they see
  There is no need to blame others
  For there is no punishment to be feared

All is forgiven
  For those who believe, they see
  There is no reason to attack or defend
  For it’s justification has disappeared

Forgiveness is a gift to ourselves
  Saving the mind from it’s self made hell
  Releasing the dark clouds of our judgment
  A mind full of belief in guilt is set free

Forgiveness is the key
  To unlock the prison of our own making
  For we are only trapped as long as we
  Refuse to use the forgiveness key

Author notes

Inspired by reading ‘A Course In Miracles’.

This poem was entered into the contest on 'human virtues' selecting 'forgiveness'. The ability to forgive is innate in all of us, once fear is overcome.

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  • Desdmona
    March 29

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    This was very good. I enjoyed the idea of forgiveness and how you explained it so well. The diction was well chosen and it flowed nicely. Well done. Good job and good luck. ~Des

  • Has to go in the book absolutely HAS to.


  • stepbystep
    March 6
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    wow,

    this is awesome!
    GREAT JOB! and congrats!


  • Nicada silver member
    March 6

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    So true and forgiveness can be so powerful but also so difficult in many situations. A strong write, and thanks so much for entering. BLessings, Patty

  • Beautiful, and very accurate. If only more people would understand this, what a difference it could make to our world. WELL DONE.


  • Mistress Leala silver member
    February 17
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    Well said. Awesome write.


  • Janice M Pickett
    January 15
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    Absolutely perfectly written. I cannot give enough claps on this page so I shall say 10000 times
    If only more people would wake up to this! How about joining my group. The law of attraction?


  • TankA
    January 11
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    Superbly written, awesome thoughts, easy flow and a beautiful inspirational message sent out to the world. I totally agree, forgiveness is the way we should all be. We all wish for it, therefore, we should also give it unto others. I am glad I read this, it is the BOMB.

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