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River's destiny

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sitting on banks
I saw mouth of a river,
emptying into ocean's bosom,
times immemorial.


a trickle in hillocks
tributaries join
on its way,
river growing wide,
estuaries replete in aquatic life.

ocean receives all water
running helter-skelter,
giving back to the skies
sublimated vapor,

rejuvenated rain,
from rarefied heights
returns to the earth.

all rivers run into sea
but it is not filled,
magic wheel turns,
incessantly,
neither making it full
nor emptying it dry.

Author notes

It is nature's way of keeping equilibrium, that all rivers flow into ocean.

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    January 16

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    Ah..the details of the journey you brought makes a message of the nature and its role to bring the truth ... well done my friend..thanks...


  • maralisa silver member
    January 11
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    a wonderful take on the promt good luck in the contest dad maralisa